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4:33 Critiques


Mike

I liked the contrast between man made and natural sounds

It could have flowed better

It kept me on my toes


Rob

I liked that cool scale sound at the beginning

The middle part was kind of boring

I liked the way it ended with the exhale


Aliki

The reverberating chime bit was really cool

It was very repetitive

Its very melodic which I liked


Jeremy

Started off very strong with the dog and baby

It hurt my ears at some times, maybe lower some volume?

I liked the computer sounding noise


Cal

Felt like a Disney soundtrack in the beginning

Didn’t have a lot of arcs

Felt pretty spooky


Julia

I liked the baby laughing

Didn’t have a ton of sounds in it at the beginning

The “ugh not again” was perfect


Hannah

I liked the concept of the hike!

It was a little uneventful

It was relaxing to listen to!

Caden

Slightly unsettling (which I think you wanted?

Could have used layered sounds really well

I liked the concept!


Garett

Definitely read as stressful morning

Could be a little slow sometimes, maybe make it more stressful?

I liked the chiming noises- reminded me of Mario kart


Tasia

I really liked that little chord at one point

Wish there had been a little more sounds

Also loved the cat and then back to writing


Jordan

It was very relaxing to listen to!

Could be very uneventful at times

It had a lot of natural sounds which was nice.


Jake

I really felt like I took a trip with you

More voices!

You kept it interesting the whole time


Maggie

Creepy baby crying was A+

Could have used more sounds to capture attention

It was subtle which I kind of liked


Anjali

I liked the teacup sound, it made me feel safe

Kinda reminded me of being stuck at home during quarantine

Overall very good vibes, I liked it


Dzifah

I loved the fireplace sound from the start

It could have had some voices really soft to make it more warm

Definitely conveyed a mood


Michael

I liked the lofi vibe to it

One of the sounds was really repetitive maybe writing or something- kind of hard on the ears

I liked the ambient can opening


Megan

The humming was very peaceful

It could be very slow sometimes, maybe add in a car ride or something

I really liked the elevator ride


Gavin

Really set the mood, felt like I was somewhere by the coast

Could use a bit more variety of sounds

I liked the voices in the background and the ping pong


Jacob

I really liked the beginning and how you kept trying it back to the exhale

Honestly I don’t have much to say, you kept the whole thing interesting

I liked the way that the sounds would echo and cut out


Sarah

I liked the transition to distorted

Could have used a little more variety in sounds

I liked the thank yous


Calvin

Honestly one of the more compelling sounds.

Some transitions felt a little choppy

I like the chanting sounds in the background


Alan

I liked the dog barking

Some of the sounds hurt my ears a little

The natural sounds kinda contradicted the other sounds which I liked


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